Thursday, October 1, 2009

Gay Ice Cream Truck edits

I cut the story down to one minute.

I started by cutting off the intro, up until "the back and forth" because that's where the story starts.

I cut everything between "what makes it the big gay ice cream truck" and "i make it gay" because it made sense.

I cut out the girl after "gay or happy" because everything else she said didn't really add to the story.

I cut out everything about him being a bassoonist. i didn't think it was necessary, and the story makes sense without that information.

I cut the Billy guy and his laughing. We don't need to hear him laughing to understand people laugh at a big gay ice cream truck.

And I cut off everything after the reporter tag.



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