I cut the story down to one minute.
I started by cutting off the intro, up until "the back and forth" because that's where the story starts.
I cut everything between "what makes it the big gay ice cream truck" and "i make it gay" because it made sense.
I cut out the girl after "gay or happy" because everything else she said didn't really add to the story.
I cut out everything about him being a bassoonist. i didn't think it was necessary, and the story makes sense without that information.
I cut the Billy guy and his laughing. We don't need to hear him laughing to understand people laugh at a big gay ice cream truck.
And I cut off everything after the reporter tag.
Thursday, October 1, 2009
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